Glass Walls
Tubs are full,
everyone's getting ready for the
big dance.
Undercover the committee works
to prevent a riot,
to stop reality from
shattering the glass walls they
built.
Guitars tune,
harmonicas wail,
children rush to the
musicians.
Seeking out the
culprits,
trying to stop the riot
before it
starts.
Swing your ladies and
a dol-ce-do.
People dancing,
laughing.
A quarrel begins.
The committee moves in,
surrounds to culprits.
Sweeps them away.
The glass walls
can remain
unshattered.
In this post I worked on improving word choice.
everyone's getting ready for the
big dance.
Undercover the committee works
to prevent a riot,
to stop reality from
shattering the glass walls they
built.
Guitars tune,
harmonicas wail,
children rush to the
musicians.
Seeking out the
culprits,
trying to stop the riot
before it
starts.
Swing your ladies and
a dol-ce-do.
People dancing,
laughing.
A quarrel begins.
The committee moves in,
surrounds to culprits.
Sweeps them away.
The glass walls
can remain
unshattered.
In this post I worked on improving word choice.